Organizational Strategy

     The organizational strategy that I am using for my essay is chronological and exemplary. I am using this method because it is the most efficient way to describe the major I am pursuing and the best way to objectify why it is a good idea. A logical argument that I will use in my essay is the fact that most people want to grow up to live lavish lifestyles. But gaining that lavish lifestyle requires a lot of work and a lot of effort. I argue that becoming a pilot might be very time and money consuming while in progress, however, once you go through your only 4 years it is amazing what you get in return. I think this logical argument will work because it shows that becoming a pilot does not require a lot of time in school, but still gives you the opportunity to live a very lavish lifestyle.

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  1. keith.hamonJune 28, 2021 at 1:15 PM

    I like the strategy, but then you write well already. Well done.

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  2. keith.hamonJuly 5, 2021 at 8:22 AM

    Uhh … which post is this? I'm becoming confused. Please label them "Post 1 or 2 or …" Thanks.

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